4月に(2校で教えるリズムが固まる前に)カウンセリングを受けた時にアドバイスいただいた、「気まま英文日記でない 英文ライティング練習」 ようやく第1弾をUPします。
レアジョブのBeginner News Articleの中の Exercise 4(先生とディスカッションする問題)の、「こんな風に話せたらいいな の理想形」を 5分以内を目標で書きました(タイピングしました)。
実際のレッスンでは、ライティングを見ていただくことも予定しているので、Lang-8に原文を上げています。
※ 今回は、添削が先に来ましたが、添削を待たずにレッスンで初稿を使うこともあります。

この記事は、日記ではないので はじめは声を当てません。
ライティングに 焦点を絞ります。
(読者のみなさんのご希望あらば、または 同じトピックをスピーチ想定で再構築した際は 声当てをします)

☆使用したレアジョブ教材は こちら
☆ディスカッション問題の初稿は こちら。

 
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[ Discussion Topic 1 ]  It is important that children learn to use technology.
[ My opinion ] 

I agree because current society is surrounded with technology in many ways, which will cause a lot of inconvenience to those who don't use it. 
Children will have to learn how to use technology effectively before entering the workforce.



[ Discussion Topic 2 ]  Parents should let children use devices as much as they want to.
[ My opinion ]
I agree basically because children should have time to learn how to use devices safely and effectively.
But some roule are also needed.
 Firstly, outdated devices are preferable for children's use.
Secondly, when children are very young, it would be best not to be surrounded with lots of technology at home.
I suggest that children, especially under 13, use computers outside of home or take computer classes at schools; frequent attendance to these kinds of places are fine.


[ Discussion Topic 3 ]   Children should play outdoors more.
[ My opinion ]
I agree 55% because of one physical reason:  staring at a display for a long time isn't good for children's eyes.
Unfortunately, it's hard to find safe outdoor places, which are also attractive enough for children.
So parents themselves have to make an effort to avoid technology at home and enjoy outdoor activities in order to encourage children to play outdoors.